Feedback Rough Cut 2

Audience: We showed this version of the rough cut to members of our A2 media class (all aged 17/18years old). This is an ideal audience to show the rough cut to because it fits within our primary target audience for the music video of 15-24year olds.

• New MP3 to stop clicking
• Wobble with camera on cake making shot
• 'Very corny in a good way" - Ben Hudson
• Cut down shots
• More variation further on
• Walkie talkie bit very good - boy in bed/girl in bed as well
• Edit out shaky footage - freeze frame, slow motion
• Blackberry
• Painting too young for 14 years old - 12 years old instead
• Birthday cards for each generation
• PS2 car game and controller
• Sync robot scene too track