Feedback Rough Cut 3

Audience: We showed this version of the rough cut to members of our A2 media class (all aged 17/18years old). This is an ideal audience to show the rough cut to because it fits within our primary target audience for the music video of 15-24year olds. 

• Experiement in a new document with fade ins etc
• Jack at the begining, layer behind him of generations, fade on out after the other
• Jack grinning
• Drum beat, cut to the beat
• Jack smiling part, mulitple layer
• match shots up with lyrics
• Bumshot, cut quickly (cross fade)
• transitions
• dont try and sequence it
• shes the one focus on the girl
• close up on katie flying, motion blur
• Depeche mode vids rocks put a face on it- feathery
• Multi layer kids dancing, ghost effect
• More close up shots
• Candle-further down each time we see it
• Performance , more footage walking into the distance
• Slow motion, ghosting, layering
• New version of track