Audience: We showed this version of the rough cut to members of our A2 media class (all aged 17/18years old). This is an ideal audience to show the rough cut to because it fits within our primary target audience for the music video of 15-24year olds.
- Extreme long take of Jack at the begining, zoom in, cut to a shot of him walking, it doesnt have to be lip syncing
- She's the one: focus on girls, split screen?
- First two performance shots, on screen far too long and too much
- second performance: fade to black, cross disolve?
- Fade to black into instrumental section
- Layer performance
Jack agaisnt the lampost, do it to the beat, use empty half, c/u of singers face or boy and girl either side- Kids on too long eating cake mixture
- greater variation of robbie
- flying: slow down, ghosting effect (trailing), animated zoom
Blowing out candles, what comes next, zooming into candle- more multiple layer
- More shot variation
- Split screen - (1,2,3,4), pop up one by one
- link all candles
- Jack sat on rocks: more shots of it, to break up performance, jumping off the rock-flying
- look through all Jacks footage, see if we can get any to break up the video
- Jack on rocks, on too long
- pace and variation
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